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[One Eternal Dream]

Mostly epic.

Well.. This is a review box, so I'm giving a full review: every single aspect (or most of them, since I may not remember all of them) that I did and didn't like about the song. Get ready to read some serius stuff! :P
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I loved the idea of the "Peace" and "Violence" kind of "fighting" constantly.. It was the touch the song needed to be awesome. And it did! :D
The main theme is catchy and simple (nice work on that btw :D), but it doesn't play much (not bad in this case), considering this song is 4mins long. The bridges you've composed fitted perfectly into the song. That is very good!
The notes you've chosen were simply mindblowing. They were really really really REAAAALLY epic. Great job, for real! This is how a song should be composed.
I loved the "orchestra" on the back.. There is always more than one instrument playing at the same time, and it gives a great feeling to the song. Also, the instruments you've chosen were great!
The only reason - ONLY reason - I'm giving this a 9 is because before the "ultimate break" (2:44), you kind of lost the rhythm.. It's not exactly constant, since there are many notes that last too long, or are too short, considering the main beat. That's something you need to work on. Aaaaaaaaalthooough.. After the "break", the rythm and length of the notes are perfect! Simply PERFECT!
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I sincerely belive that if you had nailed the length of the notes BEFORE the breakdown as much as you did after it, it would be the most epic song ever.
Believe me, I've been listening to this song for an entire week, for more than two hours each day. That's a looot of loops! I know what I'm talking about. If you could just work on the rhythm before the "break", it would be a FUCKING KICK-ASS SONG =DDDDDDD
I hope you don't get me wrong.. The song is awesome. If it wasn't, I wouldn't be writing such an detailed and big review, nor I would have listened to it for more than three hours today.
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Hope you work on the things you haven't done so epicly, and improve the epic stuff! Great job on this one :)
Have a good day,
Squiddy.

-- edit, 9 years later... 5/5. could be longer tho heh.

Veneox responds:

Honestly, this my most appreciated review I have gotten for any song I have done. I love how in depth you have went and how much you described the goods and bads.

I do believe that the slow down before the 2:44 lost the effect I was giving it, and would indeed be better without it. Good job in giving me that notice.

I'm very glad you enjoyed it and because of this review I will make a version 2, once I have gotten a better program with more realistic instruments to use within it.

Thank you. ;}

[Space Duck]

Epic.

Just fucking epic.
I've listened to it for about an hour, and I must say that I with such a sweet melody, it doesn't even need a bass. The piano itself can play the bass. I thought I was going to miss it, but it's not necessary. That's a fantastic composition you've made there!
The piano melody is soo freaking catchy, and is beautiful. It's an awesome progression there.
If I could rate your work a 1000, I would. Nice job, fellow.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks!

[World of tranquility]

As you so-called it..

..Tranquilizing. I don't actually miss the bass in there, but I'm sure it would've got much more better with it.
You nailed the notes. Honestly. You frikking hitted the spot. (I'm trying my best to not sound gay).
Gratz!

GroovyGuga responds:

You failed your homofobic efforts. XD

Thnaks for the review

[Second Groovy]

Hope you don't take this personal, but...

...It's frikking awesome!
As soon as the riff in 1:35 comes out, the song goes from 6 to 10, and so it stays.
I didn't like the ending much, since it's all suddenly and all, but the whole idea of this song (as you said to me) is exactly that. Great job!
Keep it going, Gus!

GroovyGuga responds:

Thank you, Mr. Lula Pequena. ^^

Why don't you upload YOUR songs?